Fan art/Cover suggestion D;

[HiViH]

Update1! : I updated the deviation with more details at.. everything, and.. stuff P:
And a link to my deviation at DeviantART (press the picture to enlarge -must-)
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/51074306/

Quated from my submission at DeviantART:
"Notice him picking up the hammer to with the other hand to kick their ass yeah ;D

Inspired mostly of Penumbra: Overture, a horror video game focused on darkness, and the movie The Descent, with this underground human mutated bastards eating on some people in a dark cave and the womens who came there are just fucking kicking their ass breaking their jaw and shit D; really weird stuff."

So anyhow yea, its a suggestion for the cover of what might look more.. intersting ם: or a simple fan art for the game o: its a fan art anyway but intended as an advice but take it as you will

Cover version (badly edited writing penumbra thingi yes D; )
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/1004/pe...py2jz6.jpg




Working on another version that instead of the creatures there is a bolted door cave looking thingi, that might appeal more to you p:

*Tips regarding the work itself are most welcome.

[Dark]

it looks cool, but not for a boxshot imo
turn it into a wallpaper
make the title subtler (like smaller and in the bottom left/right corner)

[HiViH]

Ty ];
I wasn't intending for THIS to be the box art P:
But since trying to show my idea in a fast ugly sketch wasn't too appealing P:
I was talking about the idea, position, how it will look XP of course not for overture, its already done, but umm.. future suggestions ? P:

[Thomas]

Oh, I like that looks of that Polished up that could be very cool!

[HiViH]

Thanks ם:
Getting tips from another forum now on what to improve, though I suck rather badly in coloring so bringing up some details in color will be hard P: but umm i wont learn any other way.
Though it was more suppose to inspire you in the direction of what "I" believe would be more "eye catching" for a box art.

You could expect an update.. though not too soon I am lazy D;

*Tips regarding the work itself are most welcome.

[Dark]

well heres a tip: make a wallpaper of this one ( http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/1004/pe...py2jz6.jpg )
would be cool (since i want to use it as desktop wallpaper

[HiViH]

Update1! : I updated the deviation with more details at.. everything, and.. stuff P:
And a link to my deviation at DeviantART (press the picture to enlarge -must-)
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/51074306/

You want it as a wallpaper ? O: omg. but does it must have the penumbra writing ? ם: il need to delete the sides and.. poop :<

[Sepai]

wow nice I love it
If thats a rough sketch then I wouldn't mind seeing the polished up version