(03-23-2011 10:04 PM)Nye Wrote: I don't mean to be mean, but there is practically nothing positive that i can say about this. I could literally list over 100 things that are 'wrong'.
To name but a few:
- Learn to use welders
- Keep the scale ratio of objects equal
- Don't use identical floor patterns as ceilings
- Use at least SOME ambient lighting
- Don't place in-game notes apologising for bugs, maybe fix them first?
- Stick to some sort of theme. You just looked like you went through every object in the level editor and tried to slap it on your map
- Fix the monster in the corridoor, i saw no monster, i stayed where i was and was under no threat.
- No music?
- No lantern? If no lantern, then at least put some ambient lights
- Poor level design, you clearly copy and pasted much of it towards the end
- The excessive capital letters completely ruin the mood, it doesnt feel like a story, it feels like some random test
- I dont want to have to list more!
Besides all that, it was quite interesting to play though...but I would recommend you take the skills that you have developed in making this map and start with something fresh
Ye sorry for that door to next level bug
and thanks for the huge feedback even tho its hard to get something like that in a feedback when its your first map
but thanks Nye.
and it will be fixed Death knight, or maybe not, but be ill start something new up
anyway, the lantern does not exist in my map,
the reason for that is because people a getting much more scared when event's happen in the darkness,
and yes i know i have to but some more light up, but i do not have that much skills in HPL 2 yet, this map have taken me about 4 weeks or more to make..
and about the story, it should say " DEMO STORYLINE " by that i mean... the story will be changed when ive got things right,
Level design , i know it aint the best, but ive made all my friends who have tryed it ofc, proud and even myself proud of it,
i know amnesia have "standards"
Sounds and music - well, ive tryed it ones with the music and hell, it went wrong the sounds got mixed into eachother and fucked up the map, so thats why there aint any sounds in the map so far hehe,
Scriping - well, let me tell, this is my first time i do just a little scripting, im trying to learn it, but yea well, its hard,
But Thanks for your reply guys!