The Electric Castle Demo

[smapho123]

This was an awesome custom story. I liked how unique it was. I thought the intro was a bit long, but it really built the atmosphere.

Spoiler below!

I think you could turn up the speaking for the intro, it was a little quiet. I didn't like how slow the guy moved when walking up to the castle, and the coughing was kind of annoying, but I thought the first hallucination was really scary. In the second one, I didn't realize there were multiple grunts until they all started attacking me! The third hallucination was kind of creepy, with the dead bodies disappearing and all. I didn't survive the fourth one; a brute snuck up on me and killed me. At the end (or the end of the demo, I thought the monster would kill me.

But over all, it was a great custom story. 11 out of 10.

[Tenno]

Let me answer your questions to help with the feedback

Spoiler below!

Did you die in the second hallucination, in the foggy dungeon with 3grunts? Yes, that part was scary as hell, I kept running into them until they had me cornered.

What happened with the angel statue? If you don't have justine it was just an empty room(apartfromthecoffin) I opened the coffin (great model) and picked up a skull which triggered a scream then I was transported back at the castle entrance.

Did you die in the chase? Nope, I ran and made it to the castle doors.

Was it thrilling? Certainly, one of the best and most thrilling custom stories yet.

Was the beginning too boring? Not at all, the voice spoke with great mystery, the slow pace of the beginning built up the atmosphere wonderfully and it got me very immersed.

Did the effects desync at start? Nope, everything was fine.

Was it scary at any point? Every hallucination was chilling, haunting and downright scary.

This story was VERY well done, I thought the music fitted in perfectly and I was completely immersed and hope to explore more of the Electric Castle. Unique and frightening, brilliant!
Please continue it

[Khyrpa]

(06-15-2011 10:03 AM)Tenno Wrote:  This story was VERY well done, I thought the music fitted in perfectly and I was completely immersed and hope to explore more of the Electric Castle. Unique and frightening, brilliant!
Please continue it

thx for the feedback
But I am lacking good content for this story so I'm doing another one that I hope will be as enjoyable (as if more) to everyone.
this:
http://www.frictionalgames.com/forum/thread-8427.html

[ZutaraRaven]

This was fan-fucking-tastic, do MOOORE!

[skypeskype]

Oh no... not this Khyrpa To hell with "I am William". WE WANT THIS DONE. please *puppy eyes*

[teddifisk]

Me: This looks fucking awesome!
*Looking through replies*
*Reads: To hell with "I am William".*
Me: :'C













lol J/K

[skypeskype]

(07-22-2011 09:24 AM)teddifisk Wrote:  Me: This looks fucking awesome!
*Looking through replies*
*Reads: To hell with "I am William".*
Me: :'C













lol J/K

I didnt want to be mean . I was kidding. Here is something to make that up.

[teddifisk]

(07-22-2011 08:32 PM)skypeskype Wrote:  

(07-22-2011 09:24 AM)teddifisk Wrote:  Me: This looks fucking awesome!
*Looking through replies*
*Reads: To hell with "I am William".*
Me: :'C













lol J/K

I didnt want to be mean . I was kidding. Here is something to make that up.

Nom Nom Nom, all better now, thanks

[zeravia]

Spoiler below!

Did you die in the second hallucination, in the foggy dungeon with 3grunts? - Yes i did... i ran into one and it turned around and killed me in one shot...
What happened with the angel statue? If you don't have justine it was just an empty - i had the stature,i didn't see the coffen but i found a skull and the statue screamed...
Did you die in the chase? - no. i ran for my life through one of the explodeing doors
Was it thrilling? - my heart was going the whole time after that first part with the body falling from the celling...
Was the beginning too boring? - no...but it reminded me of laberanth~
Did the effects desync at start? - not really no... but the bolders creepedme out because they looked very close...
Was it scary at any point? - oh yeah... that part with the doors explodeing and the very last part where you get stuck... that scared the hell out of me...

all in all...this would be SO awesome if it was like... Daniel's Real nightmare... like... he gets through all this... and then wakes up in his bed at Breenenberg to the flash back with Alexander... O___O

[Kman]

Sorry for the bump, but I have to know. Will this get finished?