Unforgiven Memories 1.1

[HumiliatioN]

(07-20-2011 06:08 PM)Kurton Wrote:  I'm not sure the hall in the first pic really needs a fountain... it's right next to the carpet, what if somebody splashes, etc Looks cluttered enough in there as it is anyway.

I like the busy warmth of the third pic, it looks nice and "safe," however i'm not sure it needs two portraits of Alexander, heh. Maybe change the second one, or remove it altogether. Also, it doesn't make much sense for the billboards coming through the window to be that small, sharp, and concentrated, I think you should just add some big ones and make them very very faint.

The blue fog in the fourth pic doesn't make much sense to me, can you explain it?

All in all though, I like your attention to basic order and detail, and it seems like something to look forward to. (Sorry, I know I talk too much.)

Okay first of all I know you have talented skill on "atmosphere and you have very good designed maps" But I'll try something different like that "blue fog" and why not alexanders it improves and scares more, if pictures changes insane portraits. And try other "forum section" "Testers needed for my map" thread there you can see whole map.

[Kurton]

That's true about the Alexander portraits, I just think it is a little repetitive if there are two on the same wall. But, I don't want to tell you how to do things, sorry if it is sounding like that :S

[HumiliatioN]

(07-20-2011 06:32 PM)Kurton Wrote:  That's true about the Alexander portraits, I just think it is a little repetitive if there are two on the same wall. But, I don't want to tell you how to do things, sorry if it is sounding like that

Whatever it's my choice

But thanks for letting me know certaing things.

[HumiliatioN]

Updates: Dark Storage map is over halfway done!

[HumiliatioN]

Good news guys, my project is nearly ready. Just adding last things but there are lot taking few days to release I think

[Tenno]

(08-08-2011 02:10 AM)HumiliatioN Wrote:  Good news guys, my project is nearly ready. Just adding last things but there are lot taking few days to release I think

Great! I'll be looking forward to playing it, the new screenshots look good by the way

[HumiliatioN]

(08-08-2011 08:12 AM)Tenno Wrote:  

(08-08-2011 02:10 AM)HumiliatioN Wrote:  Good news guys, my project is nearly ready. Just adding last things but there are lot taking few days to release I think

Great! I'll be looking forward to playing it, the new screenshots look good by the way

Good. I think I release this today midnight

[Dizturbed]

Nice screens, when it comes out, and I have decent internet, then I will play it!
Good Luck!

-Dizturbed

[HumiliatioN]

Wow this is weird.. Nobody want to comment here now when this is released and ready to play?

[Ultra Lulz]

This looks promising! I'm downloading it now, and when I'm finished playing it, I'll give you my full opinion on it

Actually, I'm a computer derp; its in a rar file; shouldnt it be in a file folder to just put in the custom stories folder? :/

Lol, I'll just put it one. And I'll try it out.