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Work in progress The Fresh Start
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darkside Offline
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Brick The Fresh Start
Hello everyone!

This is my first (released) map ever. It's a work in progress, but I'm releasing a demo to know what you think about it.

The story(so far): You (no name yet) have been sentenced to death because you killed 8 people, but luckily, you manage to escape from the prison by digging. As you dig, you find an underground complex and explore it.

Download

The demo contains the first two maps: A castle-themed map and a small archives (will work on the names and the archives).

Please give constructive critism in what have I done wrong/good.

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Okay, I'm making some progress now. Also, I'm adding some things that will require you to decide. Your decision will choose between life and death, though.

Screenies
Spoiler below!
[Image: ?di=1113209554971]

Snowy background, anyone?
Now, where was that grunt with the santa hat ....
(This post was last modified: 11-10-2011 09:05 PM by darkside.)
08-20-2011 01:07 PM
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zeravia Offline
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RE: The Fresh Start
(08-20-2011 01:07 PM)darkside Wrote:  Hello everyone!

This is my first (released) map ever. It's a work in progress, but I'm releasing a demo to know what you think about it.

The story(so far): You (no name yet) have been sentenced to death because you killed 8 people, but luckily, you manage to escape from the prison by digging. As you dig, you find an underground complex and explore it.

Download

The demo contains the first two maps: A castle-themed map and a small archives (will work on the names and the archives).

Please give constructive critism in what have I done wrong/good.

P.S.: how do you make a progress bar thingy?


Sounds good... I'll make an LP for you... ^__^ ive got three to do today... yours will be last today...

Diary of a madman -Onhold

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08-20-2011 03:12 PM
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HumiliatioN Offline
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RE: The Fresh Start
(08-20-2011 01:07 PM)darkside Wrote:  Hello everyone!

This is my first (released) map ever. It's a work in progress, but I'm releasing a demo to know what you think about it.

The story(so far): You (no name yet) have been sentenced to death because you killed 8 people, but luckily, you manage to escape from the prison by digging. As you dig, you find an underground complex and explore it.

Download

The demo contains the first two maps: A castle-themed map and a small archives (will work on the names and the archives).

Please give constructive critism in what have I done wrong/good.

P.S.: how do you make a progress bar thingy?

It was okay. Nothing special yet.. normal key finding and unlocking doors and couple monsters. Just add more in the drawers stuff like tinderboxes, oils and maybe decals is good always and paintings and more entertainment entities. Some rooms just like look like really dumb. But it was good no bugs or anything. Keep it up Smile

Investigator - WIP
(This post was last modified: 08-20-2011 03:13 PM by HumiliatioN.)
08-20-2011 03:13 PM
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darkside Offline
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RE: The Fresh Start
To zeravia: that would be good! Thank you Smile

To HumiliatioN: I will be constantly working on the layout, the rooms and everything. Thank you for the feedbackBig Grin

Snowy background, anyone?
Now, where was that grunt with the santa hat ....
08-20-2011 03:59 PM
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zeravia Offline
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RE: The Fresh Start
(08-20-2011 03:59 PM)darkside Wrote:  To zeravia: that would be good! Thank you Smile

To HumiliatioN: I will be constantly working on the layout, the rooms and everything. Thank you for the feedbackBig Grin

^____^

I can't wait to see it. I'll go ahead and post it with my LP's when it's up.

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08-20-2011 04:38 PM
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Tenno Offline
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RE: The Fresh Start
I agree with HumiliatioN, keep working on the existing rooms and polishing them up. Some notes would be good, the absence of them really damages the experience.

Spoiler below!
The helmet that caught on fire was unique and a nice touch

Good luck with completing the rest Smile

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08-21-2011 07:24 AM
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Dark Knight Offline
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RE: The Fresh Start
nice grunt in castle! lovin it.


seems thats the end?
Spoiler below!
[Image: amnesia2011082110581069.th.jpg]

08-21-2011 08:54 AM
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darkside Offline
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RE: The Fresh Start
(08-21-2011 08:54 AM)Dark Knight Wrote:  seems thats the end?

Yes, it is (for now).

Dark Knight and Tenno: Thank you for the feedbackRolleyes

Snowy background, anyone?
Now, where was that grunt with the santa hat ....
08-21-2011 10:44 AM
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Khan Offline
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RE: The Fresh Start
That was pretty good, scared the piss outa me at 3:30AM, but yes, add more things to rooms, make them look good.
08-21-2011 11:33 AM
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