Hey!
This is my first custom story that i made on a week because it was my first and i didn't work on it so much.
Much thanks to my mate rallelol try hes maps : Mysko and Big P's House try them!
Remember this is my first and a really short map!
it's not so good but try it
(02-29-2012, 08:00 PM)ThePatoAS Wrote: Can you put a link in mediafire? c:
Ye ofc
Thanks i'll try it
I You are gonna play this don't read this
Spoiler below!
So.. i played your story and just by the name i thinked that it will have a lot of scary JumpScare but you surprised me...
Normally they make JumpScare map with Teleporting Naked Guys BUT you used monsters...
you didn't scared me too much... just with that brute coming out of the dresser...
In this story there are too much dresser and Statues... But TOO MANY KEYS!
You could use a Crowbar a Hollow Needle Hammer Chiller etc...
including in the story there where keys called ''Room Key2'' and ''Door Key3'' but there weren't a Door Key2 and a Door Key
That Teleporting Naked Guy jumped too slow and it didn't screamed
The Keys were like ALWAYS In the same place
(1st Key=Dresser)
2nd Key=Dresser
3rd Key=Dresser
4 Key= well that was in a Display...
5 Key= Dresser
6 Key=Iron Maiden
7 Key=top of the bed)
i founded the keys in seconds they were in very recurrent places...
i found a bad weird that i was in a castle and then suddendly a room with an iron maiden
Well it wasn't bad for being your first custom Story i would give it a... 5/10
Some JumpScares were good, mapping was a bit repeated from other rooms
(This post was last modified: 02-29-2012, 09:10 PM by ThePatoAS.)
(02-29-2012, 08:00 PM)ThePatoAS Wrote: Can you put a link in mediafire? c:
Ye ofc
Thanks i'll try it
I You are gonna play this don't read this
Spoiler below!
So.. i played your story and just by the name i thinked that it will have a lot of scary JumpScare but you surprised me...
Normally they make JumpScare map with Teleporting Naked Guys BUT you used monsters...
you didn't scared me too much... just with that brute coming out of the dresser...
In this story there are too much dresser and Statues... But TOO MANY KEYS!
You could use a Crowbar a Hollow Needle Hammer Chiller etc...
including in the story there where keys called ''Room Key2'' and ''Door Key3'' but there weren't a Door Key2 and a Door Key
That Teleporting Naked Guy jumped too slow and it didn't screamed
The Keys were like ALWAYS In the same place
(1st Key=Dresser)
2nd Key=Dresser
3rd Key=Dresser
4 Key= well that was in a Display...
5 Key= Dresser
6 Key=Iron Maiden
7 Key=top of the bed)
i founded the keys in seconds they were in very recurrent places...
i found a bad weird that i was in a castle and then suddendly a room with an iron maiden
Well it wasn't bad for being your first custom Story i would give it a... 5/10
Some JumpScares were good, mapping was a bit repeated from other rooms
But to be on-topic now...
@OP I really want to try the story now that I saw Trollardo's LP. Trust me, I'll be just as terrified as if it were blind. I expect to lose complete control of my bowels soon.