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RE: Better Go Alone - Stepper321 - 02-08-2012 Ah look my thread got moved to the right place. Thanks! (02-07-2012, 07:38 PM)Dark Knight Wrote: Stepper21/Yes part 2 will be longer. RE: Better Go Alone - Andehande - 03-10-2012 Good old troll story RE: Better Go Alone - QysteiN - 03-12-2012 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W5p5vHZAm24 RE: Better Go Alone - Kreekakon - 03-16-2012 Played it, and here's a bit of criticism: -Room design needs improvement. Many of the levels are too bare. This can hurt the game as it makes the levels look overall uninteresting. -Gameplay is too linear. Sometimes that's not exactly a bad thing, but in your story it's simply point A to point B, and then instantly next room. You should see if you can add a bit more content/variety to spice up the overall gameplay experience. -Something I did like a bit was the final big scene. This may sound a bit harsh, but that scene was the only part of the game I found somewhat original. Spoiler below!
Still for a first custom story, I can see you're experimenting with several things, and that'll really help you improve. Looking forward to what you can bring in Part 2 EDIT: Feel free to correct me if there's anything you may disagree about my review. I always willing to put it up for discussion if you feel need for it. Also played it again, and here's a few more things I didn't notice the first time: Spoiler below!
RE: Better Go Alone - Stepper321 - 03-16-2012 (03-16-2012, 05:37 PM)Kreekakon Wrote: Cool criticisimsim comment or something, thanks !Thanks for all that recommending and such, i know its a bit from A to B and everything, but i think you are gonna like part 2 , it has voice acting and not point a to b, well a bit. RE: Better Go Alone - tomasote - 03-30-2012 Nice custom story! i almost pissed my pants there are still things you need to work on. otherwise, good story and im waiting fr the part 2 RE: Better Go Alone - Kaizy - 03-31-2012 Hm, why haven't I downloaded this one yet I'll give this one a shot next time I'm on RE: Better Go Alone - Kaizy - 03-31-2012 Alright, I gave it a play Spoiler below!
As a first mod, it's a decent starting point, but you do need to work on most of the foundations to making a map, such as texture, design, layout, atmosphere...the like. Just work on those and your maps will improve greatly. |