Amnesia Story Idea(s) Thread

[The Rock Worm]

Rock Worm, could you please show everyone here the story I sended you by P.M?

Have in consideration that that story was completely made by me, with some S.T.A.L.K.E.R influences.

I believe the following is th e story idea you sent me by pm...

The big machine

Character: X (but, it's known that it has a psychological thing)

One day, you hear in the radio a legend about a machine. It's not known it's origin, but the Man of the Machine comes at you a few hours or days you die. The man tells you how much time you have, and, by what is known, he never failed in it's predictions.

Suddenly, an earthquake shakes the ground. The sky is red, and everyone's screaming. You can see monster's silhouettes, and you decide to escape. You see a hatch, you open it and...

***Progress of the story***

Finally, you arrive in a huge place. In it's center, you can see a very big machine. It's covered by a blue glass, and it has a blue aura on it. Then, a very deep voice, tells you:

"
-You arrived. I didn't expect this one. Why didn't you convert into my servant?

-Because I'm different. By what it seems, you sended a power blast of A-Type that changed the human mind, so everyone wanted to kill.

-**Voice gets distortioned a louder voice, like asking help** Help me! I have been corrupted! I'm... ***Get's deeper*** Listen, I'm your god. I was, better said. When the mining corporation arrived here, the sounds broke a bit my ery week crystal, making me almost dissapear. Now I'm just a faint shadow of what I was. I controlled it all... but then, the Aliens, knowing I was here, injected me the rage virus. You know the worst of all? You've surely heard of the big machine... and the big machine is everything. You, me, these walls... We are a machine and I was it's brain. When getting corrupted, I'm not omniscient and this world is dying.
"
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Also, I just noticed this image and my mind is already fast at working up a story to it http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs16/i/2007/2...egehel.jpg

Trying to figure out what monsters to have. Most can be regular stuff (Penumbra/Amnesia), any thoughts on how to do the 'doctor' on the right? Would only hearing it (or possibly using the Kaernk class monster somehow) work?