My First Custom Story - Richard's Manor

[Tenno]

Enjoyable story. Some of the places you chose to hide the keys were challenging yet still managed to stay fun. There wasn't enough oil in my opinion, I spent about half the game walking around in the dark lighting dim candles that didn't help much. There were too many monster appearances as well, every time I read a note or picked up a key a monster spawned and I spent a lot of my time hiding in cupboards. The storyline wasn't very strong, in fact I couldn't tell exactly what it was about

Having said all that, its still a great story and I hope you continue it