Better Go Alone

[Kreekakon]

Played it, and here's a bit of criticism:

-Room design needs improvement. Many of the levels are too bare. This can hurt the game as it makes the levels look overall uninteresting.

-Gameplay is too linear. Sometimes that's not exactly a bad thing, but in your story it's simply point A to point B, and then instantly next room. You should see if you can add a bit more content/variety to spice up the overall gameplay experience.

-Something I did like a bit was the final big scene. This may sound a bit harsh, but that scene was the only part of the game I found somewhat original.

Spoiler below!

This section is a bit more with concerning specific details of the CS:

-The key at the start is IMHO a bit too hard to spot. This can probably differ from person to person. This is just what I think.

-This is part of the problems with level design. The chandeliers are in quite awkward positions in the first room. I've never seen chandeliers put like that before 0.0

-You should consider adding doors/holes at the start of each level, preferably the same ones as the one you just entered in the previous map. Adds a sense of continuity.

Still for a first custom story, I can see you're experimenting with several things, and that'll really help you improve. Looking forward to what you can bring in Part 2

EDIT: Feel free to correct me if there's anything you may disagree about my review. I always willing to put it up for discussion if you feel need for it.

Also played it again, and here's a few more things I didn't notice the first time:

Spoiler below!

-Don't know how I didn't acknowledge this, but the "throw" into the room in the second level was a nice touch =)
-There are a few disconnected models in the water level, mainly the door room in room 1 with the plates.