Nintendo Castle Horror

[Nickshrike]

I just played this whole custom story and found it interesting and a bit unique at the start, yeah it's a joke story and that isn't really my thing but it was much better than a lot of joke stories i've played.

Spoiler below!

At first, I found the story funny with all the naked guys attacking the suitor and I enjoyed Luigi's mansion as a fun game so I really thought everything fit quite well.
I didn't particularly like the outside bit at all as it got really tedious, once I got inside the house it was still pretty tedious.
The captain falcon bit was quite funny and I laughed at that but afterwards it started to get tedious and boring again.
When I saw the monster I knew it was a poofer because of the way the custom story was made, that is probably a bad thing as it didn't scare me at all.
Consider getting some proof reading for your notes, some of them made little to no sense, i'd be happy to help with that if you wanted.
If you were to create a sequel that kept the originality that some parts of your story had along with making it a bit less tedious then I reckon the story could be a lot better.

I'll give this map a 3/5 as it leaves a fair bit to be desired but I could see some good map making skills in it.