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Obscurity - An Amnesia Custom Story
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RE: Obscurity - An Amnesia Custom Story

(09-03-2012, 06:48 PM)Kreekakon Wrote: Hey, props to you ElectricRed, and your helpers! That looks, and sounds great. The sounds were quite creepy in my opinion.

All small "logic typo" though in my opinion though:

The memento he got said the "Lock was weak, and some acid should be able to melt through." I think this doesn't make full sense because he has no idea that there is usable acid somewhere to melt through the lock with. What he should say is: "The lock looks weak, I might be able to find some way to break it." This sounds much more logical.

^Purely assumption of course. If your story has demands otherwise feel feel to correct me Smile
Haha, I knew someone would point that out! It's something I'm definitely going to change, and simply forgot to do so before recording the clip. Thanks! Big Grin

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09-03-2012, 06:53 PM
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RE: Obscurity - An Amnesia Custom Story - by Kman - 07-24-2012, 02:11 AM
RE: Obscurity - An Amnesia Custom Story - by Ermu - 07-25-2012, 09:27 PM
RE: Obscurity - An Amnesia Custom Story - by Ermu - 07-26-2012, 12:38 AM
RE: Obscurity - An Amnesia Custom Story - by TGST - 08-21-2012, 02:25 PM
RE: Obscurity - An Amnesia Custom Story - by ElectricRed - 09-03-2012, 06:53 PM



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