Pasta

[Kman]

I give this A+ stars out of 5.

>Videooven's thing

Anyways, to be honest I didn't think it was really as amazing as everyone made it out to be. It wasn't necessarily bad, it actually had quite a few interesting points in it (I especially liked the last few paragraphs), but the whole "cursed video game" thing has already been done so many times that it's hard to really pull off anymore without people just ending up comparing it to the stories that founded that idea (IE I can guarantee you if you put this on Creepypasta or /r/nosleep you can expect quite a few "BEN BEN BEN BEN" comments). Basically, it has a lot of potential, but I think with the idea you're basing it off there's not too much room for originality. Though I definitely think you have some serious writing skills, I'd be interested in reading more of your stories if you have anymore