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#11
RE: Mornenion (If you got a better name please tell me I need one)

Pictures added!

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07-21-2011, 11:21 PM
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#12
RE: Mornenion (If you got a better name please tell me I need one)

(07-21-2011, 11:21 PM)TheDavenia Wrote: Pictures added!

Uhm.. I'm not so excited to pictures because every pic has "Blue torches" and nothing special about these pics. I don't wanna be too harsh but think more how many "lighting and lamps" you are gonna put your project. Just try to help and more "Entertainment maybe objects more.. and that atmosphere too.. It's ok so far. I just wanna play demo and I can get my honest feedback then! Smile

But I'm interest about that church... I haven't seen but maybe few on custom stories church stuff. Only Amnesia original story Smile

Anyways good luck with full release.



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07-21-2011, 11:58 PM
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#13
RE: Mornenion (If you got a better name please tell me I need one)

(07-21-2011, 11:58 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote:
(07-21-2011, 11:21 PM)TheDavenia Wrote: Pictures added!

Uhm.. I'm not so excited to pictures because every pic has "Blue torches" and nothing special about these pics. I don't wanna be too harsh but think more how many "lighting and lamps" you are gonna put your project. Just try to help and more "Entertainment maybe objects more.. and that atmosphere too.. It's ok so far. I just wanna play demo and I can get my honest feedback then! Smile

But I'm interest about that church... I haven't seen but maybe few on custom stories church stuff. Only Amnesia original story Smile

Anyways good luck with full release.

Thanks,
I know the underground part of the church has to many torches and i was going to change that.

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07-22-2011, 01:21 PM
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#14
RE: Mornenion (If you got a better name please tell me I need one)

Added:
Maze and Guestroom!

Set prison back to 0% because were going to make a new one!

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07-23-2011, 02:29 PM
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RE: Mornenion (If you got a better name please tell me I need one)

Since I don't know anything about the story, I can't say a lot about this.
But seeing the pictures:
1. Bedroom: There is a lot of free space. You can change that if you make the room smaller, or add some props, but since it is a bedroom, I would give u the advice to make it smaller.
2. Same for the prison (second and third picture). There is too much unused space.
But you already said, that you'll redo it.
3. The church looks quite nice, except the high use of blue torches Tongue

All in all, I want to give you a well meant advice: you make your rooms way too big, so it looks
very empty, and you're missing some details. Add those 'small' things into your rooms, so they look alive. Hope this helps Smile

Good luck on your project!

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07-23-2011, 03:38 PM
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RE: Mornenion (If you got a better name please tell me I need one)

(07-23-2011, 03:38 PM)MrCookieh Wrote: Since I don't know anything about the story, I can't say a lot about this.
But seeing the pictures:
1. Bedroom: There is a lot of free space. You can change that if you make the room smaller, or add some props, but since it is a bedroom, I would give u the advice to make it smaller.
2. Same for the prison (second and third picture). There is too much unused space.
But you already said, that you'll redo it.
3. The church looks quite nice, except the high use of blue torches Tongue

All in all, I want to give you a well meant advice: you make your rooms way too big, so it looks
very empty, and you're missing some details. Add those 'small' things into your rooms, so they look alive. Hope this helps Smile

Good luck on your project!

Thanks but,
Those pictures are very outdated.
We have a brand new bedroom,
Were about to make a new prison
Only the church is not outdated! Tongue
Castle is completely finished!

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07-23-2011, 04:26 PM
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#17
RE: Mornenion (If you got a better name please tell me I need one)

Removed the demo.
Prison is now 50%!
Adding pictures when prison is finished!

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07-24-2011, 12:52 PM
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#18
RE: Mornenion

-Added Castle's Storage to the map list!
-Prison is almost finished!
-Set the % of the whole custom story to 60% because were going to add more stuff!

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07-25-2011, 12:37 PM
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RE: Mornenion

-Added the Team!

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07-25-2011, 06:12 PM
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RE: Mornenion

Sounds good. Awsome maps too :> Church ? DANG.
07-26-2011, 09:27 AM
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